Thanks a lot! It was a line from a song i'm writing, but i had to change the line because my parents would hear it. The new chorus is: Slowly she said, i wish that i could hurt you, Slowly she said, i wish that i could burn you, All of her life, she's been chased by wolves, All of her life, she's been lost in the woods,
'Slowly she said...' is magnificent. The words... the imagery... It's perfect.
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ReplyDeleteIt was a line from a song i'm writing, but i had to change the line because my parents would hear it.
The new chorus is:
Slowly she said, i wish that i could hurt you,
Slowly she said, i wish that i could burn you,
All of her life, she's been chased by wolves,
All of her life, she's been lost in the woods,
When i'm done the song i'll put it up here.
Right on...
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